Very nice idea
Overall, good concept, good control, good graphics, good sound. Only problem was that I sucked and couldn't get past 4 butterflies. Oh well.
Keep going with stuff like this, it's simple but works very well.
Very nice idea
Overall, good concept, good control, good graphics, good sound. Only problem was that I sucked and couldn't get past 4 butterflies. Oh well.
Keep going with stuff like this, it's simple but works very well.
thanks for reviewing,
yeah it was the meaning to be simple, i have some more ideas in my head, not all of them originally my idea, but i haven't seen them on newgrounds yet so, it would be nice to present my own version of them,
most people that tested it couldn't get above 10 the first times, i geuss it needs some practice, after a while there are subtle changes like u get difirent kind of butterflys and 2 webs ... that's all, but its enough to make it harder,
Nice
A good take on an original game. I tried easy, and it was easy (duh....) then hard, and it was hard. Oh, wait.... (I had 2 left but they weren't near each other, dammit!)
Anyway, nice graphics, sound, control and storyline is funny (if not silly and short). Obviously the game as a whole is a short, but nice one!
Thank you.
Good stuff
I finished it, which is an achievement cos I'm no gun-maester. Interesting quiz, I think a sequel would be good. Make it more pleasing to the eye, like having buttons instead of just clickable text, and frames and backgrounds for the pics. Loved the nude anime btw Greyflag
Good job finishing it.
NUDE ANIME!!!!WOOHOO!!!
jesus christ!
i was playing and thought, great game so far
I think I actually had a heart attack. wtf was that picture?!?
You woulda got a higher score but my medical bill for the heart treatment has put me in a bad mood.
Yahoo... get insurance dude! hahahaha
Nice, but
I liked the poems, there were a couple that I didn't read at the end. I like your style of conveying your world to the reader, it's very authentic. I think that it's great that poems are put up on NG, it adds a bit more flavour!
Small criticisms: make the buttons easier to press, as the only part you could click on was the text which is quite thin (know what I mean? maybe not...)
More work on backgrounds and illustrations would make this a little easier on the eye. This is promising work (especially the poems). I hope to see more in the future!
Greyflag
Yeah i know what you mean i will update!
Yay
I won! First time! Ok second. Third. (teehee). Anyway though it would be nice to see a few of these on NG for General Knowledge. I presume you're from the UK with reference to Gordon Brown. Ha!
Yep, UK all the way!
Extremelly snazzy
Like the paper effect. This works really well, it's very comic-book style. I'll be sure to check out anything you do in the future!
So do I (I can say that since I didn't draw it, Banana did :P)
Thanks :)
Really good.
This would be perfect, it's new, it works, it's really new, it's clever, it's really really new. One thing: make it more pleasing to the eye. Nicer graphics etc. Good voice too!
Visual design isn't my strong point, which is why I decided to use a more simple look to the poem. If I tried making it more complicated and interesting, there was the risk of ending up with a disaster, really. If I get around to do another one of these, maybe I'll contact someone who can acutally draw / animate and it'll look better. But I'm still quite pleased on how it come out. Thanks for the support and the review!
I want more!
Make it longer! Much longer! It could be great.
OK! OK! I also want to make another one, with cats, gold to collect, angpau and much more...
My current projects: Tentman!, Greyflag's Biology, 28 Seconds Later.
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