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Very nice idea

Overall, good concept, good control, good graphics, good sound. Only problem was that I sucked and couldn't get past 4 butterflies. Oh well.
Keep going with stuff like this, it's simple but works very well.

black-raven responds:

thanks for reviewing,

yeah it was the meaning to be simple, i have some more ideas in my head, not all of them originally my idea, but i haven't seen them on newgrounds yet so, it would be nice to present my own version of them,

most people that tested it couldn't get above 10 the first times, i geuss it needs some practice, after a while there are subtle changes like u get difirent kind of butterflys and 2 webs ... that's all, but its enough to make it harder,

Nice

A good take on an original game. I tried easy, and it was easy (duh....) then hard, and it was hard. Oh, wait.... (I had 2 left but they weren't near each other, dammit!)
Anyway, nice graphics, sound, control and storyline is funny (if not silly and short). Obviously the game as a whole is a short, but nice one!

MadMastaMonkey responds:

Thank you.

jesus christ!

i was playing and thought, great game so far

I think I actually had a heart attack. wtf was that picture?!?

You woulda got a higher score but my medical bill for the heart treatment has put me in a bad mood.

MrCrap responds:

Yahoo... get insurance dude! hahahaha

Nice, but

I liked the poems, there were a couple that I didn't read at the end. I like your style of conveying your world to the reader, it's very authentic. I think that it's great that poems are put up on NG, it adds a bit more flavour!
Small criticisms: make the buttons easier to press, as the only part you could click on was the text which is quite thin (know what I mean? maybe not...)
More work on backgrounds and illustrations would make this a little easier on the eye. This is promising work (especially the poems). I hope to see more in the future!

Greyflag

vancleff responds:

Yeah i know what you mean i will update!

Great for a first game!

This is brilliantly original for a first game, there was obviously great effort put in for the actionscript. Ok, graphics could be a little better...(!!!) but you can always upgrade them when you remake the game (which I strongly suggest!)
Greyflag
ps it got quite difficult...

Lol

Haha death flavoured pie. I knew it couldn't have been blueberry. Really nice artwork!

Yay

I won! First time! Ok second. Third. (teehee). Anyway though it would be nice to see a few of these on NG for General Knowledge. I presume you're from the UK with reference to Gordon Brown. Ha!

Boredlord responds:

Yep, UK all the way!

I'm impressed

Wow what an original and addictive game! Can't find a flaw with it! Brilliant

Unbelievable

At first I thought, wow, nice simple game. 40 levels later and I realise how long I've been on it. Logically speaking, I should give you a 0 for making the game so addictive. But 10 is better methinks.

My current projects: Tentman!, Greyflag's Biology, 28 Seconds Later.

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