Score: 6

"Methinks success"

submission: Dragon Claymation

date: June 15, 2008

Yeah as a claymation it's not bad. But next time a storyline and some more meaty content.

Score: 7

"cool"

submission: Elastic Guys

date: June 15, 2008

The style is new and cool. But stick men can get repetitive, so make sure the interest stays throughout.

Score: 8

"Very nice idea"

submission: Catch the butterflies

date: June 15, 2008

Overall, good concept, good control, good graphics, good sound. Only problem was that I sucked and couldn't get past 4 butterflies. Oh well.
Keep going with stuff like this, it's simple but works very well.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Infekt

date: June 15, 2008

A good take on an original game. I tried easy, and it was easy (duh....) then hard, and it was hard. Oh, wait.... (I had 2 left but they weren't near each other, dammit!)
Anyway, nice graphics, sound, control and storyline is funny (if not silly and short). Obviously the game as a whole is a short, but nice one!

Score: 8

"Good stuff"

submission: The Ultimate Gun Quiz

date: June 15, 2008

I finished it, which is an achievement cos I'm no gun-maester. Interesting quiz, I think a sequel would be good. Make it more pleasing to the eye, like having buttons instead of just clickable text, and frames and backgrounds for the pics. Loved the nude anime btw Greyflag

Score: 6

"jesus christ!"

submission: See What Is New

date: June 14, 2008

i was playing and thought, great game so far

I think I actually had a heart attack. wtf was that picture?!?

You woulda got a higher score but my medical bill for the heart treatment has put me in a bad mood.

Score: 8

"congrats!"

submission: Black Mesa

date: June 14, 2008

This is a great flash, i liked the animations, graphics style, timing and the song. Say thanks to Dan-Plus-Add cos it's really great! Although I agree with that guy below me when he said the vocals sometimes aren't very clear. Subtitles can remedy!
Good luck for the future!

Greyflag

Score: 7

"Nice, but"

submission: Poem Anthology

date: June 14, 2008

I liked the poems, there were a couple that I didn't read at the end. I like your style of conveying your world to the reader, it's very authentic. I think that it's great that poems are put up on NG, it adds a bit more flavour!
Small criticisms: make the buttons easier to press, as the only part you could click on was the text which is quite thin (know what I mean? maybe not...)
More work on backgrounds and illustrations would make this a little easier on the eye. This is promising work (especially the poems). I hope to see more in the future!

Greyflag

Score: 9

"I loved it"

submission: The Marathon

date: June 14, 2008

This was really nice, the walking and running styles were really authentic and genuine so congrats on your "animation exercise"! It was a nice little flash with a funny ending and moral which is good. I suppose you could have compressed the song to make the flash size a bit smaller, but 4.1 mb is ok!
I'm also just starting to get a bit more serious with flash and am still using a mouse; by the looks of things, you're at the stage where you can invest in some proper flash making equipment :P
GreyFlag

Score: 9

"Brilliant!"

submission: Pooh - It Had to be Done

date: June 14, 2008

Hahahaha I'm still in tears of laughter!

This was a really well put together flash, I like all the little things like Pico putting his hand up and Piglet just shaking his head, teehee!

All brill stuff, apart from the quality of your voice in the audio, as you've probably noticed it's a wee bit crackly. But that's really not a problem in the long run!